As I began to go deeper into the darkness, I began to smell something putrid, and it got stronger and worse the deeper I went. Ahead of me the path split into two directions. The blueprints from the computer showed that going to the left would lead me to air duct.
“We’re almost there. How’s everything back there?”
“Everything’s fine sir,” It was Valentine. “How much further?”
“According to the blueprints, we’re a few meters from the main duct. Once we get there, we can get into the filtration room, which will put us near the North Wing entrance.”
Suddenly, the duct gave way and I fell through. It felt as if I were falling forever, until I finally hit hard ground. The air was knocked out of my lungs, and I gasped for air. Nothing felt broken, but my entire back side was in pain. I stared upward at where I fell from, and it was a miracle that I survived with minimal injury. My enthusiasm was short lived when I realized where I was. Call it poetic justice, but I found myself in the very maze I constructed where people were turned into carriers.
I laughed at the notion, and picked myself up from the floor. From above me lights were shown down on my face.
“Sir, are you alright?” Valentine shouted. I really wanted to chew his ass out, but now was not the time. I had to figure a way out of this death trap.
“Sir, we’re coming down!” Almost immediately, Valentine and the others were on the floor, by use of rappel rope. If there’s one thing we all need to learn from shoddy Bronson films, is that you always need rope.
From a distance, I could hear footsteps and the hissing of these undead creatures getting closer. It was darkly lit, and the only light I could see was the soft glow of yellow light, and the electric sparks from exposed wire. Whatever course of action we took, we had to use extreme caution.
The maze was designed for death, not for escape. Even if we made it to the other side, we had to find a way to open the steel door at the exit. Someone had to be on the other side to open it using the control panel.
All of a sudden there was a loud crash, followed by an explosion. The cries and moans of the carriers grew louder and more frantic. The slow footsteps I heard earlier were no longer at a distance, but closing in on us. The sound of their feet made the ground I stood on tremble, as if a stampede of frenzied livestock were about to trample us. I raised my weapon and waited, as the others did the same. The first carrier came into view, and I didn’t hesitate to pull the trigger. Slight recoil jolted my shoulder as I watched the retched creature slump to the floor.
Just read the story and I’ve got to say that you caught my interest on how the story progresses. I’ll look forward to the next episode.
I had to look up quite a few words as a non native English speaker. Well, I could’ve understood everything without looking the words up in a dictionary but I always have the urge to comprehend every little word and meaning there is behind it.
Keep it on.
Whoa, nice read so far (read page 1, no time for the rest right now ^^)
Thanks you ^_^. I have the second story written already, I’m just waiting for more viewers to get a good following before I post up the story. Also, if you have any good ideas that might make the story better, feel free to suggest something. My goal is to make these stories into an online graphic novel so that zombie enthusiasts everywhere can enjoy it.
This is intense. The way that the main character is not visibly effected by the deaths of the others and his emotionless and calculating thoughts make him relatively unique in the zombie apocalypse genre. It makes for a superb relief from the stupidity of other protagonists in ZA stories and makes him seem like a boss. Can’t wait for the next one.
Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I have so much fun writing stories like these. I will be posting up the second story as soon as I fix all the typos and grammatical errors. Again, I’m glad you enjoyed this.
If you guys could, tell your friends about this story. I want to give it as much publicity as possible. I will posting the second story tonight.
Actually the reference to Asimov is amazing, but he was supposed to be more of an obviusly good guy (remember the three laws of robotic sciences, as stated by Isaac Asimov). But well I guess it’s all right since these are Zombies, or rather “infected”, so these laws don’t have to apply and Asimov can be a bad guy for instance.
I had that in mind when creating Asimov. In this story, Anatoly Asimov is a good guy, it’s his understudy, Jonah Stockman, who is the villain. I’ll provide a background story for Asimov as the story progresses.
Well, then I’ll be looking forward to it.